I'm so sorry

I never meant to live

To love so hard

That I smile every day

To have hurt you so badly

what can i say?

That i feel the knife plunge into my heart

For screaming at you, telling you i love you so

picking up that knife, cutting you so deep 

with the pain i have caused you

I am so sorry for letting myself free

Sorry for not being able to know you

I see things differently

For wanting to have my questions answered

But mostly i am so sorry that you had to be around for it all

Reviews

[Jazique]

Awe nice the simple words of "I'm sorry" nicely done. May forgiveness come or not but, remember to let your feelings ouot. Well done with feelings in your work and all.

[Joiedevivre]

Deep feelings that merit forgiveness and love. You have mine :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe we need to seek forgiveness. Even if it does very little. It is like a closure to something that was left alive and needed to be said and closed down. I like the emotion and desire for forgiveness. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Seeps with sorrowful emotions!

[KAREN]

Powerful and deep, full of emotions!

[RTB]

they ddnt deserve you thats what i got out of it i liked it emotional sarcasm i felt it and it was deep.

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is great, you can feel your sorrow within each line. Good writing.

[Dream Weaver]

This reminds me of the song "love hurts" by Nazereth, very poignant!

[Skateprincess]

I loved the flow of this it was sad and yet showed your softer side. Good job

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a really emotional heartfelt read..