It Never Goes Away

It Never Goes Away

The hurt you caused me 

it never goes away

The wonderful memories you gave me

they never go away

The tears will always stain my cheeks

It never fades away

The knife you stabbed me with that day

it never left

The years go by and still i try not to think of you

It never goes away

Our dreams together 

it just never went away

Your first love 

it just never goes away

Reviews

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"The knife you stabbed me with that day
it never left

The years go by and still i try not to think of you
It never goes away

Our dreams together
it just never went away

Your first love
it just never goes away",

these four stanzas were amazing and touched my heart greatly. I could relate to them.
The last stanza was very true. You can never forget your first love, no matter how hard you try. This was amazing! You are a very brilliant poet. Keep writing!

[My Fair Lady]

So true.

[shedevil]

very nice i love the fact that you made i statemnet with so many forms

[Dark Angel]

Ugh... I understand this sooo much... except the guy who did it to me is now on my list... he stabbed me more than once if feels like... lol oh well. Lovely poem hun.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Some memories are permanent. We need them to affirm we have lived and learn. The description was strong making your point in this poem. Last line is the real truth. The first love will always be remembered. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the message in this hits home hard. intense but beautiful

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

So true.... people are heartbreaking, they leave permanent scars.