I want to know

I want to know

Did you want me?

Did you hold me?

was i ever kissed?

Were you ever smiling?

do you miss me?

Did you look away?

was i left alone?

fending for myself?

didn't you ever want to know? 

what are your thoughts?

why wont you get well?

can't i have a mother?

Do i get a choice?

does the hurt ever go away?

can i wish you dead?

if you passed would anyone care?

why do this to your self?

don't you get tired of it? 

why was i lucky enough

to never have a mother? 

Reviews

[Toon]

very good channeling of emotion. it's really well done in that its all questions because I suppose that's what you're left with in that situation. i think out of your poems that ive read, this one ranks very high not only for the technique, but for the awesome unification of technique and content. i like it.

[sarah]

amazing! great poem!

[JanieB]

Wow.. fantastic!

[Jonathan]

Wow instead of placing question marks at the
End of every line you should have placed exclamation
Points because I sensed a bit of anger coming from this.

[Mauricio Montoya]

like how you put this together, great job well done.

[Adrien Hupp]

It's a beautiful poem i love it and how it flows and what its about:D keep writing:D

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

love the style of this poem!

[TAO]

Ah...this reminds me of my own mother...and...oddly enough, an ex-girlfriend. This poem is like the fragments of memories of I have of them. I almost feel like this poem is questioning the reality of those memories. Wrong or right, that's what it feels like, and reminds me of my last two days trying to figure out my own memories... Dark enough. Well done.

[Kelley]

This was very sad but many can relate.

Great poem thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

This peice gives a look at the feelings of people who never had a mother lovely..

~SK

[Cassiopia Summers]

This piece gives off the sense of your life flashing before your eyes and the subject is finally realizing what she had and didn't have. It's a great write, I really like it.