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Cool night air surrounds us

The blue glowing of the moon 

Holding your warm strong hand 

Listening to the smoothness of the water 

Falling down the smooth slick rocks 

leaning my head against your shoulder 

you look at me with those big  beautiful soft eyes

moving my hair back as my body tingles from the slight touch of your fingers on my skin. 

The light blue water on the black rocks behind falling into a pool of coldness only to flow down stream through rocks and sand, never knowing where it goes. 

Looking at you int he moon light gives me pleasure, happiness, comfort. 

"i love you" i whisper into your ear as i smile at you

Reviews

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

wow i love it..you have great potential.. :)

~SK

[Akroma]

I really enjoyed the imagery in your poem. A moment of complete contentment. Thanks for sharing!

In Respect,
Akroma

[Lauren Beth]

You set up a truly beautiful moment in time...one that I can really see and feel. Nicely written...I love the picture and how it goes along with the use of the color blue throughout the poem.

[Dark Empress]

Beautiful!

[Tate Morgan]

A beautiful resonance to this like youth

[Misty Blue Eyes]

not sure if this came out right i was kind of distracted so if it doesn't make sense please tell me