You Took that

The Blood boils in my veins at the site of your face

Closing my eyes is not possible

My anger that resides inside, bubbling and brewing

For I wish you to suffer

The roses don't bloom here, there is only madness

How Dare You 

Steal what was not yours in the first place

You took that from me

My only line of defense taken, stripped and stomped on 

You took my innocence with you 

When you stole that kiss, that was not yours to have

You took me as a victim 

But i come back stronger, more able, head held high

YOU can never take from me again 

What was not yours to take in the first place!! 

Reviews

[My Fair Lady]

Girl Friend... yes. You stand up for your self in this piece and that is always admired. This is powerful and strong.

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

Blooming madness! I love it! Very fierce writing! Keep your head held high, this is a great piece of reassessing a situation and being stronger from it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very powerful poem. Anger and disappointment were strong in the words. No weakness. Just honest and straight to the point poetry. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Dream Weaver]

A beautiful vent on a uncomfortable subject matter.
Very intense and sad at the same time...

[Aven]

you write with crude elegance and suppressed passion... a most refined poem... well done!

[Ruth]

Reclaiming! After subjection to hurt, this piece really hits hard, a powerful poem!
Great wording and hopefully cathartic :)
xx

[Kelley]

I feel the anger in this one and I take that it was in your past.
I hope your in a much better place now.

Great rant

Kelley

[Lauren Beth]

The anger just exudes from this piece...you effectively expressed the strong emotions that you where feeling...as others have said, very intense poem!

[Tate Morgan]

well that was intense a very intense you sure he only took a kiss?

[Brandon]

This is an extraordinary piece, i loved all the emotion coming from it. Great work, keep it up.


100/100