You Took that

The Blood boils in my veins at the site of your face

Closing my eyes is not possible

My anger that resides inside, bubbling and brewing

For I wish you to suffer

The roses don't bloom here, there is only madness

How Dare You 

Steal what was not yours in the first place

You took that from me

My only line of defense taken, stripped and stomped on 

You took my innocence with you 

When you stole that kiss, that was not yours to have

You took me as a victim 

But i come back stronger, more able, head held high

YOU can never take from me again 

What was not yours to take in the first place!! 

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

This atmosphere could lead to an argument, and a powerful, beautiful innocent, pratially broken girl who walks forward steadily and slaps the asswhole in his face! Haha bravo. Strong write with shouting emotions!

[KatiePie]

oh my the anger in this is heart blazingly beautiful

[Anna]

Angry :P But very well writen.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great job well done.

[Wondering Mind]

Yea! Give it back...Strong write.

[sarah]

this is really powerful and really well expressed and written good job

[KAREN]

Deep emotion and readers can relate to this poem!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Standing up to someone not to take what he shouldn't was wrote masterfully in this poem!!

[Nadi]

Rage poem, nice.
Really captured the emotion here, you can feel the rage from the first line onwards.

[~BlueSkyy~]

I can relate to this.
Nice poem. :)