Fallen from Grace

He has fallen 

The only world he has even known,

Wings so black, shimmer in the moon light

He has fallen from grace

Walks the streets of complete darkness 

Alone in this world he sees a girl

Sitting on a bench crying

kneeling down to look at her face

black tears fall down her cheeks

Her wings  taken, bleeding 

she has fallen from grace

he offers his hand to her 

looking up she smiles

walking away into the mist of the night

to a grace they are welcome

for they have both fallen

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Amazing. It sent a slight shiver through my spine! The feeling of loss/ or becoming an aoutcast and finding people who share similar feelings. I love the way you depicted the whole idea in angels with wings and that sort. Nice poem.

-Wela.

[The Cute 1]

cool i love this

[Nadi]

Naw, this is adorable. Sadness seeking sadness.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Very nice.

[J.M]

A very compelling read - I love the way the end if the stanzas is always about falling. Good job!

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I like it, very well written, it's dark and enjoyable

[My Fair Lady]

I hope he risked the fall to find her.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime must take someone swimming in the same B.S to understand each other. The poem told a good story with a happy ending. Hurt and pain teaches us to appreciate any kindness given. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kelley]

Perfect poem for Halloween but with your poems this could have a deeper meaning.
Either way I liked what I read.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[silver threaded queen]

some are above, wings so white and then they get cast out falling...... their wings turn black