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Years  passed me by 

Your eyes haunt me every night

Every time i close my eyes i see that glare

The "you are my prey" stare you have in those dark brown eyes

I'm done being scared

It's just not fair

Ripping me apart in my dreams

Tearing me right down the middle of my seams

Stitch by Stitch i am being sewn back up 

For my heart and mind are scared 

Will you never leave me repaired?

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

it sounds like the writer is started to get up the courage to overcome someone that has been holding them down for much too long. sounds like they finally realize how much damage that person has done and is ready to break free and live a better life. I can totally relate to this! its a wonderful writing! very scary as well. the way you write makes the reader scared for whoever this writer is. it leaves you in suspense to know what happens to them.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"Years passed me by
Your eyes haunt me every night
Every time i close my eyes i see that glare
The "you are my prey" stare you have in those dark brown eyes",
this stanza was the best of all. I loved this poem. It sounded like the narrator was coming over something bad that happened to them, like what Angelina Paige said. This wonderful, and I can relate to it :) Keep writing!

[Brandon]

Very emotional, i loved it a lot and i hope to see more work from you. Keep up the great work.


100/100

[Coyote Poetry]

I had to leave countries to escape pain. But time is the healer. I like this poem. I like how you create the story and the strong ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

"Will you never leave me repaired?" A question, only an action can answer. Let the wounds heal and keep your scars as reminders, no one can break you if they dont know how to work you.. another Great piece

[J.M]

A very captivating poem and I liked the imagery of being almost like a toy that has to keep being repaired. Good job!

[Kelley]

This made me feel like you were trapped somewhere
you didn't want to be. Get out before its too late.

I may of read it wrong but thats how it left me feeling.
Great poem thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Dark Empress]

Sounds like someone has gotten courage and realized that some person in their life has been bringing them down. Great write :)