Afarid

Afarid

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

You took my breath away
How dare you stay
In the kitchen alone with no one around
I couldn't even stand my ground

I DIDN'T WANT YOU THERE
I hated you being in my house
I hated your stare
Your hands  on my wrists locking me there

I'm too scared to move, you lean in. 
pressing your lips on mine, my head spins
No No No go away 
But you don't care

Standing on my own confused 
You lean back on your heel and smile
How dare you? you are the most vile

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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The heart and the mind become a fence.. and sometimes the trespassers forget that once there was a path.. This is a great piece of writing. Its the moments between yes and no, go and comeback...to finally.. never again. Theres alot of emotion here, the idea though is to use it in more than just writing next time.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Wow this poem is good.. Nice

~SK

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweet. *Grin* I enjoyed reading this short romantic kitchen scene.

-Wella.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very emotional, very angry, nicely done

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice write seems as though you playing
hard to get :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


lock your doors. nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


gates close...Good writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's a beautiful poem i love it great job:D keep writing:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good writing, the the talent is seen in each line, the construction of
this poem brought the expression to life, Wow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this is intense

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good poem...
domestic violence is a horrid thing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes
Misty Blue Eyes

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