colors

Blue droplets of rain, 

jump off green leaves

hitting the brown earth below.

The yellow sun shines, 

lighting up the bluish green waters. 

red leaves turing to yellow as fall hits

 White snow falls over brown, dead grass

Lighting up the blackest of nights. 

sprinkle the earth with colors, 

seasons is what we get.

Reviews

[sarah]

I love rain! and anything that has to do with rain

[KAREN]

I think this was very good! Good job!!

[MuSe Ampoule]

love this...great imagery. Love the argument below about the spelling of the word. Adds to the pallet! Colo(u)rs

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great creative poem!!

[Anna]

Life would be boring without colors but bright colors give me headaches. So cute great job :)

[Wondering Mind]

colours, what would life be without them.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is gorgeous!
it reminds me of that seen from the disney movie Bambi when its raining. one of my fav movies as kid.
i really like this, i think it might be my fav poem of yours so far.

[Buddhistboy73]

Really liked the use of colours (sorry I'm English!) in this piece, and the way it tells a story. "Sprinkle the earth with colours, seasons...." my favourite part.
I will say though that the presentation and lack of capitalisation does let your work down a little...but this is easily changed I feel.
Overall though, i really enjoyed this write, and look forward to reading more of your thoughts..

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I enjoyed this write, this is lovely.

[Ted Lambert]

I've always liked nature poetry, and this fits right in! I do believe it could benefit from a bit more length, perhaps drawing from the dead grass' getting reborn in a non-ending cycle of ever more COLORS...... Just a thought. I liked it a lot.