colors

Blue droplets of rain, 

jump off green leaves

hitting the brown earth below.

The yellow sun shines, 

lighting up the bluish green waters. 

red leaves turing to yellow as fall hits

 White snow falls over brown, dead grass

Lighting up the blackest of nights. 

sprinkle the earth with colors, 

seasons is what we get.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

simply B e a u t i f u l! picture out of classical artwork, colorful landscape, waving the sense of calmness and little sad! so nice...

[Blake Q Hatfield]

A vivid view of the seasons. I really like that take on them!

[Hollow Man]

This is lovely. And I see you've been playing around wit punctuation as well. A few small corrections: turning in the second stanza should be turn, a period after hits, and in the third stanza is should be are. Excellent write love

KGS

[Coyote Poetry]

The white stuff will becoming to Michigan soon. Cover the ground with a laying of the white snow. It is pretty. But I would like a trip to the tropics. I like your poem. Great description of the gift of Winter. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Graceful]

so cool. l.o.v.e it!

[JanieB]

I love the words " sprinkle the earth with colours"..really beautifully put.

[TAO]

Very well done. I'll admit, I didn't like the last line, much. It didn't seem to mesh with the rest of the poem, but, for what it's worth, it was clever. Very clever. I enjoyed this piece immensely.

[YouoweYoupay]

Lovely display of colors and seasons. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you, Misty.

-Wella.

[cassandra violet]

simple but yet fully effective in drawing a beautiful scene of nature.

[Grace Catherine C.]

very pretty