Life

Life Sucks taking your soul with it as it goes

 Life never turns out what you want it to

Life is something so special, take and hold it close

 Life is something you should never take for granted, for it will reach into your heart and rip it out

Life is fragile, hold it with care and nurture. 

Life, it can either make you or break you......

will you be made or will you be broken?

Reviews

[Marshall Hanson]

Life is what you make it. Great poem!!

[Tony]

A personal opinion, worked gracefully toward a question. One that causes more humans more distress than most of them would admit.
I wonder what the author's opinion is to what would 'make' you and what could 'break' you?
I like the observation here, shows deep thought about purpose and so forth, but I am left questioning 'things' and am suspicious that was the intention of the author.
If so, Well Done!

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Life Sucks taking your soul with it as it goes
Life never turns out what you want it to

I really loved this part of this write.
Well done!

[Alicia Schroeder]

So true, greatly put into words, great job

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life is eternal...nice sentiment..

[Dark Empress]

I like it "will you be made or will you be broken?" That is the question, isn't it?

[Graceful]

i love it!

[Muhammad]

Hmmm.."will you be made or will you be broken?"

That's a question I often ask myself. There's something really serene about this piece, I like this a lot. Keep it up :)

[A Jack as the King]

This is a nice work from you, one that is very thoughtful and something of a self-monologue. I feel as though you portray life as a beautiful thing that will rend you apart if you do not embrace it as it deserves.

Nice work.