Midnight Sea

let a wave capture your soul and sail it away to find love.... Wow another new one my mind is finally free to write again ... thank god!!!

Your eyes match the color of the midnight sea

Capture my heart and I’ll take you there

Will travel around the wounds of your soul

Till the gentle winds of my kisses warms love between the cracks

The waves might rises high but the sun rays of our smiles will carry us away

I’ll guide your dreams and place a shining star forever glowing for our light

My arms are like heaven healing you with each touch

Between the clouds of my thoughts I have one space left and I welcome you inside

Like the guardian of the night I call the moon I will sit upon your bed and watch over you

All your wishes that you throw into the ocean's well I will capture all the sea shell pennies and make them come true

Lay with upon the sand and let’s forever tattoo our shadows together as the waves make us reborn

Your eyes match the color of the midnight sea

Capture my heart and I’ll take you there…

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very nicely written with that is woven with the magic of romance and guardianship.. a lover and soul-protector. Your ending is magnificent.. inviting the one to win your heart to an open door. I love the graphic art that accompanies this one.. nice job all the way!

[Ladysue]

This is a beautiful sentiment indeed. Gorgeous flowing words...Just lovely...nicely done...

[The Water Queen]

This is beautiful. Great write. Cant wait for more read requests from you.

[deeps]

This is amazinhg! I enjoyed reading this.

[nightmask]

there were several stanzas I really enjoyed i think my favorite was "Lay with upon the sand and let’s forever tattoo our shadows together as the waves make us reborn
Your eyes match the color of the midnight sea"
even if it didn't rhyme it had an amazing feeling to it while I read it great job keep it up :]

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

In the third to last line fdo you mean to say 'Lie with 'me''? This is sucha beautiful sentiment! Well expressed and so hopeful and caring. Any woman would adore having a man truly feel this way and express such thoughts and devotion. Thanks for sharing. A lovely write indeed.
Light,
SiddARTha

[Tina Kline]

This is fantastic, very beautiful and so romantic. I visualize you as a protector watching over the one you love, like a Guardian Angel. Your words flow with magic here. Love this one a lot!