Life Is What You Make It

Life Is What You Make It

A Poem by seanhoag

I'm dead, destroyed, hollow, dry, wilted

Being pushed from here to there by the air

All around me is life

Growing, pushing forward, resisting, living the life that was always given to them

They are constantly changing, transitioning, shifting, transforming into the life they were meant for

I remain... unmoved, unchanged, constant, stagnant, stuck like the f*****g muck in my soul

Where is my life?

Where?

Where?

Huh!

There it is

A spark, an ember, an ignition, a flame ready to ignite

Come on! Come on!

All the conditions are perfect

I'm dead

I’m dry

I’m withered

And all of the sudden the flames shoot up

Sending sparks across the heavens

And ash into the sky

being blown around by the wind

Taken up and down and around to everywhere

Over everything

And as the flames disappear

And the dust settles

I realize that I have become a part of it all

All the life that I so envied

And I realized that life isn't given to you

You make it

© 2016 seanhoag


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' A spark, an ember, an ignition, a flame ready to ignite .. .. Come on! Come on!'

' I’m withered .. .. And all of the sudden the flames shoot up .. .. Sending sparks across the heavens .. .. And ash into the sky .. .. being blown around by the wind .. .. '

'And the dust settles '

'I realize .. .. .. ..'

How wonderful is that.. tis not merely the outer elements but the re.birth of self. So finely put!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

seanhoag

7 Years Ago

Thank you!



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' A spark, an ember, an ignition, a flame ready to ignite .. .. Come on! Come on!'

' I’m withered .. .. And all of the sudden the flames shoot up .. .. Sending sparks across the heavens .. .. And ash into the sky .. .. being blown around by the wind .. .. '

'And the dust settles '

'I realize .. .. .. ..'

How wonderful is that.. tis not merely the outer elements but the re.birth of self. So finely put!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

seanhoag

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
grand illusion and a life-changing trick.....
important message conveyed so effectively and effortlessly.....
beautiful profound poem.....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

seanhoag

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it.
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

you are welcome.....!!! :) :)

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Added on March 20, 2015
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