Despair

Despair

A Poem by The Sober lie
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Collection of short pieces.

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Nails, 
brittle and bruised,
stutters along ash and coal shards,
scratching jarred claws along her back,
waking death from her door.

Despair weeps from thee,
despair bites onto thee.

The long w***e swore the black death,
the long w***e swore the red
breath,
so I drank, drunk in mind
and I devoured, crimson in
wine.

© 2011 The Sober lie


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the tactile imagery is pure and enveloping~ the consonants and vowels present their form in lingering sounds that echo after every line~ gripping writing all the more powerful in its velveteen presentation~

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The Sober lie
The Sober lie

Noosa (transient heaven), A true God believer, not religeous, not pretentious, evolution is the reason and will of God (look it up!), Australia



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