Sanguine

Sanguine

A Poem by Sophia
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Kind of a love poem. I'm working on it, but this is what I have so far. I'm not really sure I can call it a poem. The title means lively and secure.

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It's when I hear your laugh swirl with mine 
that this world turns to gold and
all that is dark fades away
time is nonexistent and we
are here, now, with our 
hearts beating a sound no one can
contain
This is how I love you

© 2018 Sophia


Author's Note

Sophia
What do you like and what should I take out?
Does it seem kind of bumpy?
Should I pick stronger words?
Do I need to change the title?

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Added on February 3, 2018
Last Updated on February 3, 2018
Tags: love, poetry

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Sophia
Sophia

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I'm in high school trying to find out what i'm passionate about. more..

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