Feelings

Hii Dear one,

 

As I wished you Good evening and my mind's eye saw

You in shades of crystal pure and decked in colours sweet

Loveliness is your visage and beauty manifests in thy countenance

And it reflects thy loveliest heart as a heavenly angel

as it rightly said ' Face is the Index of mind'

 

This loveliest soul rocked my heart and resurrected this dead poet to life

to scribble a few lines to etched it as flower as the clay watered to prepare itself to sprout

and I present them to her in affectionate admiration

 

the unseen smile that shook my heart and flashed thoughts in the blue space

and rained flowery showers poetic on my wider soul and streamed in brooks

as blood through veins to keep the life on move

 

I see the truth and nothing but the truth in this beautiful soul

and the seas of my  heart embraces her every tear and wish to leave her without a fear

let me clear it is only a soul talk and nothing passionate of this mortal body and mind

 

And I dedicate this few flowery lines that i pluck from my poetic garden

and present her in pure admiration.

Reviews

[Shannon April Alice]

how very funny that we should both write work in the form of a letter, serendipitous i do believe. absolutely beautiful dev.

[Stephen]

~~ Very peaceful write ~~ Here I find this write`s written in 2011 .. long years distance .. huh? I`m glad to read this poem, it`s really very romantic, emotions are all floating over the words ... here we all can find some inspiration of life behind your words ... Great job!

[?]

Truly enjoyed this beautiful...romantic piece. Filled with love and admiration for someone. Very heartfelt piece.

[Jvl narasimharao]

This is really a wonderful romantic poem.You are really a great poet.Being an Andhraite I am really proud of you.
yours JVL

[Celeste21]

This is so dreamily romantic. J'adore. J'adore :))