Dimmer than others

Dimmer than others

A Poem by Sandra

Some stars shine brighter than others
A few are barely a twinkle in the sky
But just means they are farther to reach
Are you willing to travel the distance for them?

© 2021 Sandra


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Definitely! If that's what it takes.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Excellent poem Sandra and it speaks to more than just stars but dreams as well. It exudes with a hopefulness and kind message of encouragement. I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. Thank you for sharing with us your art.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perhaps the understated is more full than it appears. The speaker seems to say come hither to the addressee.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sandra

2 Years Ago

Indeed it does

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