The Little Girl Said...

The Little Girl Said...

A Poem by Lost Soul
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A short comentary on love gone by the wayside

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THE LITTLE GIRL SAID

 

 

"Love me", the little girl said.

"Iv'e skinned my knee", he said.

"Love me!"

"Iv'e bloodied my nose", said he.

"Love me", she cries.

"Can't you see that it hurts to breathe", he whispers.

"Love me."

"The bad man is still there", he weeps.

"Love me", she implores.

"I'm sinking", he replied.

"Love me", her voice drifs back.

"I have never stopped", he laments to her memory.

© 2008 Lost Soul


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very nice job! there is a lot of emotion in this piece. keep on writing!
laceyjane

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Lost Soul

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