Forbidden Love

 

 

 

FORBIDDEN LOVE

By Suzanne C. Suber

 

Two persons from different times.

Possessing the same likes and inner feelings.

Meeting from separate dimensions.

Divided by a lucid barrier.

Reaching out but not able to fully touch.

A fear exists of shattering this transparent wall that comes between:

the fear of ultimate harm.

Remaining in a form of suspended animation so as not to alienate one another.

 

 

© 10-28-91

 59 words

 

Reviews

[Suzanne C. Suber]

Thank you for catching that Marie,
I meant to categorize it as a poem. I didn't realize that I hadn't.
Thank you for your review,
Suzanne

[MarieCo214]

Uh, this isn't a story. It's a poem in poem format. Maybe you should label it as what it really is, unless you have a reason to make it so.
I can see that it doesn't rhyme and doesn't meter. If it did, I think it would be ruined. The sentences are interesting and what's being said is intriguing. It's good work, just the "poem" deal bugs me.