Into the Fire

  I find a bind inside my mind

A place I cannot escape

For which there is a lock 

That holds a key

That will not engage the hasp.

  I hear my voice, my screaming voice

Loud the earthy rasp.

Plunge my hands into the fire

To cleanse and set me free

Of burden that is great.

  I wander on into infinity

Stumbling through the gate

Of time and tell

Of all to late 

Of what drives me to my fate.

  In time I guess

I will find

The key that holds the lock

But till such time

I plunge my hands into the fire.

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Surrender of being in the moment and yet wanting and searching for more is still hidden deeply inside or the awareness wouldn't exist.. Nice write..xo

[MoriartyMesa]

The flow is nice, but there needs a few cosmetic edits, but the pauses are nice and the wording. One or two little fixes and you can win a contest.



Nice job