Fall Strong

 Fall to heaven, fall to grace, fall to save yourself the face. 

Fall to sun, Fall to moon, Fall to let yourself swoon. 

Save it all and give it up, let nothing fall, but do fall up.

 Don't fall down, don't fall back

Don't fall upon the seething rack.

Don't break, don't bend, don't budge.

Don't let yourself be a smudge.

 Wipe the stains, remove the tears

Lets not cry, there are but happy years.

Long the journey, short the ride

Live in life, live don't hide.

 

 Breath in, breath out, breath to breath

Let not your inner child seethe.

Don't remember, just forget,

Don't ever, ever, let them see you sweet. 

Reviews

[Octob3r Star]

Very nice rhythm. :) Cheers

[joshua deathdealer]

I love the positive messages here. Great title as well. We need more positive poetry like this. We really do. I do anyways. Thanks for sharing this.

[CHRIS ANDES]

this is truly amazing =}

[Ripple of Aqua]

Very, not to say uplifting, but encouraging. Telling us to stand tall on our own two feet, because that's all we have left in the end. Awesome flow.

[MoriartyMesa]

Nice flow of the words and the end really closed it up.