Something If Not A Spark

 Something that came from a spark. 
If not ignited by the passion of the dark.
Something of love, something of desire,
Something that came from a spark.

 Something that fell from above.
If not someone that fell out of love.
Something of need, something of want,
Something that fell from above.

 She yearned for me and burned for me

I too burned for her.

Shed her tears on my shoulder and mine on hers

She was my rock, I her bolder. 

My flowered damsel I rescued from distress

I her prince in rusted armor.

My living fairy tale in one sweet breath

I her breathless moans.

She was my passion, I her desire

She lit in me a brand new fire.

She was my need, I was her want

My exotic dancer in a private show.

She got under my skin and into my mind

I got into her heart.

She was my complement and my refrain. 

I was her opposite attraction.

I was the dance, she the song,

music was our love.

She played me well, new all my strings,

and pulled them near to break.

Something happened, something changed,

Someone went awry.

I guess it was me, it must have been me.

Although I don't know why.  

 

 

Reviews

[Becky]

Very heartfelt piece. The second to last line really rang a clashing cord with me for some odd reason the first time I read it, but when I went back and re-read it, it flowed fine. Great write!

[CHRIS ANDES]

so tragic
somehow reflects a lot of frustrations
real nice piece
=]

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much for reading it...!

[CHRIS ANDES]

;p

[Octob3r Star]

Its like questioning yourself to death. A very moving piece. Thanks for the write. Cheers

[realmwriter]

I was and am still questioning myself to death! thank you for the read...!

[WhiteWillow]

A love which falls apart, without rhyme or reason, was not meant to be. A lovely reminiscent piece.

[realmwriter]

Hard to say what it is compleatly but reminiscent is certainly in there. Thank you for reading it I aprecaiate it...!

[Ripple of Aqua]

Loved this piece; the pace, the words, the flow, the imagery were all perfect. I could tell that from the first stanza.

[realmwriter]

Tahnk you so much. I am still astonished by the reviews I get...!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is so beautiful. Really well done. I love the flow and intensity.

[realmwriter]

Just re-read it and realised what it was about. Sometimes I don't know after or during writing. Thank you for reading it...!

[Ruth]

This blisters, potently so...the essence of holding the connection so close and then something changes, I know that feeling, not pleasant and you delivered that point really poignantly here xoxo

[realmwriter]

I realise now that I must have been thinking of my ex wife when I wrote it but it is not entirly about our relationship. Thank you for reading and for your review. It is an honor that you do...!

[The Simple Minded Poet]

I can relate to this,great write,especially the last stanza

[realmwriter]

Im glad that you can. I hope that it would help you if it needs to. After all is that not why we write?...!

[Lily Mae]

Very sad to have had and known it and then wonder alone why it is gone.. very powerful..xo

[realmwriter]

I know why it is gone now but it wasn't entirly me...! Thank you for reading and reviewing my works...!