the Passion of the Lover

  Don't cry my love, 

the tears will never dry up if your heart cannot heal.

Don't worry my love, 

the years will never find you if your soul is always sick.

Cast your eyes not to the ground, 

the light cannot shine through them if they can't be seen.

Don't be afraid my love, 

you can't move forward if you allow fear to stifle you.

Don't let me go my love, 

I cannot protect you from the world if I am not there.

Cast out the doubt from your mind my love, 

you are worth far more than you believe.

Don't be shy my love, 

your courage knows no limits when you allow yourself to breath.

Don't be so quick to point fingers my love, 

remember three more are pointing back at you.

Don't forget to remember me when I'm gone, 

because I will remember you.

Don't forget to morn me if from slumber I do not rise, 

because I will morn your every tear before I rise

Don't remember the worst in me, 

because though my mistakes are many I will forget about yours.

Don't be too critical of me, 

because I was only trying to push you to your best.

Cast me to the fire if you must, 

but I will throw myself to the flames.

Cast your doubt upon my eyes if it suits you, 

but He is my only judge.

Cast me to the ocean if that will please you, 

but I will find my way back to the broken beach.

Cast me out of your memory if you must, 

but I will not forget your passion or your lust.

Reviews

[That_Girl]

I like it... it's pretty fluid. The message is sweet. There are a few spelling errors throughout but nothing major. Nice! :)

[realmwriter]

Thank you for reading it. I was using spell check as I wrote this piece so I know not of the spelling errors for which you speek. If you would be so kind as to point them out I would be in your debt. Though, regretably, it will be some time before I am able to fix them.

[That_Girl]

"allow yourself to breath" Should be 'breathe'
"Don't forget to morn" should be 'mourn'

That was all. :)

[realmwriter]

Oh cool. That explains why those words weren't underlined when I wrote it. I will fix it when I can. Thank you.

[That_Girl]

Anytime. :)