Bonfire For Pride

Crystal night, Crystalline light, reflect upon this face

Take back the shards, take back the breath,

Leave the in this lake

Swim to the moon, fly to the sun, burn away the tears

Give up your ghosts, give up you past

Stay the from these fears

Cold the soul, hard the heart, remember what you've done

Take the your time, take the your tole

Leave this fight for none

Walk to the sun, run to the moon, dissolve away your pride

Give all of nothing, give nothing of all

Stay away confide

Cover your vanity, blanket your pride, life is slipping off the line

Take away your strength, stay the of your might

Leave hunger for the wine. 

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful stuff.

[AJ Kristiansen]

Wonderful work! Really enjoyed reading this! Beautiful images! You just need to watch your spelling and to read it out loud a few times to pick up on missing words? (or is it me??) You're a great poet realmwriter! Keep up the great work!! :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So many creative lines flowing through this piece!

[Lily Mae]

I live and breathe by the firelights glow.. this is an excellent write and I love the "leave hunger for the wine"..

[joshua deathdealer]

I love bonfires for anything and I like the ending. Excellent work.