Bold Wind Blown

Rush the winds, howl from every corner of the world

A shiver in the spine of humanity as it takes its icy hold

Piercing to the core an unrelenting w***e

Howl from the west and take with you the unrelenting cold

Howl from the east but please keep it to yourself

Howl from the north and south and remind me of your ghost

Prick up your ears and listen to it

Calling  ever so faint a whisper

Loud and clear to ride the winds

Just on the edge of fear and reason.

You might not see it but it's there

Blowing through the night and fair

To crack the whip and take the ride

Blow from every corner across every field of grain 

She took her hold, sunk in her fangs

She has her grip and bights down hard

No quarter will be given nor mercy shown

She is an unrelenting w***e 

She won't bend ans she won't brake

She look at you and drive the stake 

She brakes your back and snaps your spine

She reeks of a*s and pine

Reviews

[Silent Lover]

it is clear a heart aches from the touch of a women -

[Kenneth The Poet]

Irregardless of the negativity, this is a rhythmic piece. This reads like a dedication to a succubus, the female demon that lays with and murders men. Great piece I think.

[Ruth]

You have mystery and intrigue love, I like this a lot, you make the reader dwell on what can be in an ethereal landscape xoxo

[Lily Mae]

"She brakes your back and snaps your spine
She reeks of a*s and pine"

I love this.. has just the perfect amount of dark mystery.. and that last stanza rocks it out..x :)

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

No quarter will be given nor mercy shown
This is my favorite line. A really great write and it was a little confussing to me but I think once io read it a few more times I started to understan. :P

[joshua deathdealer]

"Calling ever so faint a whisper" I love the spacing in that line. It really adds to the feel. Nice rhythm scheme and all around, well written...xx

[BlueDreams]

Nice write... Keep it up dude.. :-)