Crimson Tides Of Murder

 Broken dawn, comes no more

Senses fade, quietly slip the shore

Yesterday came, tomorrow went

Broken dawn, angrily rent

 

 Skys behond, what never was

This is what remained of us

Faded back to memories

Finding what she only sees

 

 Fire fades into the black

Serenity gone, take up the slack

Searched in vain, lost in time

Found nothing of the past

 

 Mirror cracked, mended soul

Pondered over shards of glass

Made them last, the pieces found

Bury me in shallow ground

 

 Burn the clover, burn the field

Reep rewards my blood congealed

Seeled inside, this my tomb

Stripped violantly from the womb

 

 Broken dawn, comes no more

Senses fade, quietly slip the shore

Yesterday came tomorrow went

Broken dawn, angrily rent.

Reviews

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

"crimson tides" you wrote this?

[joshua deathdealer]

Great flow and emotional. Enjoyed this one.

[Kiri Nells]

Wow! An easy read for the flow, but definitely something thoughtfully written. Nice imagery and emotion in his! Love it! Keep up the work and thanks for sharing!

[Don Shaw]

Great work . Flow is awesome, i love it.

[Lily Mae]

This has such great flow..it reminds me of the ebb and flow of the tide..x

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Such a great flow and rhythme!

[Kenneth The Poet]

This has some great rhythm in it. Nice job overall.