Untiteled Chapter One Part One

  She walked into the diner with a saunter and glow the like of which he’d never seen. At that moment he fell in love with her.

  She was a tall brunette with a dancers figure, hair down to the small of her back. She wore Levis and a T-shirt with six inch stilettoes but she may as well have been wearing an evening gown.  She was drop dead gorgeous and she knew it but she carried herself in an approachable fashion. Rose took a seat at the counter.

  What can I get for you miss? Ray asked, as he handed her a menu.

  Orange Juice please, she replied, eyes scanning the page before her. Ray sat a tall, cold glass of Tropicana in front her.

  Excuse me miss, I couldn’t help notice you seem a bit flustered, is everything okay? I’m fine, just a lot on my mind is all, Rose replied. Well if there is anything I can do to help let me know. Actually there is. Is there an A.T.M. nearby? I’m a bit low on cash. No, I’m sorry. The closest one is at the bank on the other end of town but they don’t open till 10:00 beeins how it’s Saturday an all.  I could lone you some coin till then if you like miss, Rose, my name is Rose. No, thank you, that won’t be necessary, I’ll be fine till then. Suit yerself, what can I get for you then Rose?

  How bout biscuits and gravy with an over easy egg on top and a side of bacon please?
Sounds delish, Danny’ll have that out for ya in a jiff! Anything else I can getcha, Ray asked as he refilled her O.J.? I’m good for now thanks, Rose replied.

 

Author's Note

I just started this so it is far from finished but please let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Yina]

Oooo he's a waiter;) lol. I like the story. Keep going!:)