I Challenge the Rules

Just something I like to do from time to time. Its fun for me!

I scribble and jot and I jot and I scribble

but I'm not sure I get a word out wise

 

I play with words and word with play

but I'm not sure any since is made

 

I toss about ideas and ideas about toss

but I'm not sure I can be understood

 

If to be understood must since then it make

or is it enough to be clear in the lines

 

when a word one is placed just there

does a word two belong instead

 

if this line is written just so

then does this line any better go

 

if the ryme scheme leap words a s such

then is a simple ryme scheme to much

 

must spelling always be hard and phast

or do sounds do the same as letters vast

 

does grammer always have to be used

or can none exsist and still one be moved

 

do questions always need a mark

and exclamations a point

 

can not the tone from here be gathered

or must spelling and grammer have mattered

 

can one not see the questions above this point

its enough one thinks how words are aranged

 

I jot and I scribble and I scribble and jot

but I'm not sure any since is made

 

I play with words and word with play

but I'm not sure I get a word out wise

 

 

Reviews

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

Wow this was uniquely done! It was extremely fun to read too!
Now I want to try to attempt.....lol who am I kidding! I'll just read yours instead!

I've read this three times already & it truly looks like a lot of fun! So different from what I have read on here! Gives you a different aspect on poetry & there are soooooooooo many styles that can be done!

Awesome piece here, I look forward to reading more like this! Congrats my poetic friend!

[realmwriter]

Thank You gentlemen for those reviews, I apreciate it for sure!

[Silent Lover]

A clever poem. A hint of a past sedition against my language art class arose in me. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Awesome brother. Break those grammar rules to your heart's content.

[Ruth]

Creativity holds no bounds I always say :) lol
And rules are meant to be broken in art...we can become too weighed down with structure...grammar and so forth...we should always be thinking of new ways :)
xx

[Don Shaw]

I love it . I think most want to be understood.The creative mind is probably the most misunderstood of all.