See Foam Green

I dream of a time when I won't have to struggle anymore.

I dream of a time when Humanity will finally see that we are here to help eachother through this hell we have created.

I dream of a time when we won't have to struggle anymore!

I know this time is soon to come but I cant think of a time before this, that life was as difficult as this time is for us now!

I dream of a time when we will stop all of the violance and the blood letting in the streets,

and see that we are all in the same proverbial boat.

Then we can help eachother stop it from sinking and sail to a better shore!

I dream that one day we will all come together hand in hand, heart to heart and let love flow like water.

I dream that the sky really is blue, and the ocean really is See Foam Green.

I dream in vivid colors and even more vivid sounds of tranquility!

I dream that we are truly all the same but vastly differant.

I dream that we are all friends and family and that love isn't but a hug away!

I dream about all of these things.

I dream about great streets of gold and stories untold.

I dream of Heaven, and of God, but most of all, I dream of you!

Author's Note

I dont really know where this came from. I just hope that my writers block is over for now at least...! Let me kno what you think please!

Reviews

[Enigma]

Your writer's block is definitely over. A random string of lose thoughts sometimes end up in a similar way. Deep in our core, we all have the same dream, that is, a world where is peace and love "is only a hug away". I loved this line. :)

[Ripple of Aqua]

Very whistful and understanding. Makes you feel like we should all stand up for this cause. You did the theme justice.

[Tate Morgan]

Mankind is so inherently selfish and greedy For some reason he seems unable to let go that

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is a nice piece, rather utopian, yet beautiful.

[Joshua]

You misspelled "proverbial" on the eight line and I saw a couple instances of the word "won't" without the apostrophe. Looking past the typos, though, I can see that this is a very good poem. It is simply amazing in so many ways.