Raise A Fist In Faith and Fight

 Angry ocean waves crash against tumulttuous crags of stone

These will bring you down

Tempestuous fires saround an ever cold heart

These will lead you away

Disturbing garish dreams invading the light of day

These will drive you insane

Delusion of grandure dance in your dimlit darklight

These will prove you wrong

Mangeld rotting corpses play in your backyard

These will take you to the grave

Furious storms ride bolts of lightning through your brain

These will punish your pride

 

 Dont worry the oceans waves will calm and you wont be brought down

I say the tempest will be slain and your heart will warm again

The light of day will cast the disturbing dreams out

Insanity will take its  rightfull place in the minds of the weak

Grandure will give way to humility in the grey between your ears

You will make your point known as you stand correct

The corpses will be removed and buried where they belong

You will inherit and apreciate a long joyus life

The frustration and confusion that is the storm will calm

You will regain your composure and restore your pride

 

 We all have ups, downs and sideways moments

We all suffer when it seems we can bare no more

We have all delt with pain behond what we could imagine ourselves capable

We are not perfect, we are vulnerable and impresionable

We all need to take a time out just to breath

It's a small world, we should all relax and realise we can make it better

We don't have to bow down or bow out, we can choose to fight 

We don't have to give up or give in, we can win the war

The battle has only just begun. Rally yourselves to the cause

THis is a world worth saving, this is a place worth living

Stand up, Stand Strong and never give up hope

Keep the faithand fight, for without it we will loose it all

 

 

Author's Note

Please tell me what yuo think!

Reviews

[Ruth]

Beautiful build up in this piece love! Gotta stand up straight and know we are good at heart...some people say it is but a dream to unite....I don't think so! I think it is possible and when we have all had enough....that time will come...already is!
Amazing poem!
xx

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

wonderfully inspirational!

[Writing with Kae]

I like it, to keep fighting the good fight of faith...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Cool work. Inspirational to say the least. Keep fighting that fight.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the statement this makes, last couple of lines BRAVO!

[brenda]

thias is amazing love wat you say here !!love it !:)

[AndyJCash]

Interesting, kind of like a motivational speech turned into a poem. The first verse was genius, the structure of it all.