Baja Baja Baja

 My Little baby girl

What will I do

If not provide

for you I do?

 

 My little Deja

what have I done

if not of self

I give the none?

 

 So I swear

to you this day

Of self, Ill give

With me, you'll stay!

 

 I'm done with all

the playing around.

I've got my act

to-gether now!

 

 I'll make you proud

to call me dad.

 If you are not

I wont be sad!

 

 I'll try again

to make you proud

I will not cry

I swear aloud!

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Very nice I remember when My son was born this overwhelming feeling that came over me .How strange it was to have a emotion I could not quantify.I had never felt anything like it.Then it hit me This is the first time I loved another more than myself

[Tony]

Baja= 'below' or 'under'.
Baja California entonces, 'below' california.

Good Poem.
I'll take another!

[brenda]

sweet poem !!! aaw:)!!

[realmwriter]

The moment my Daughter; Deja Denise Ray Van Dusen was born into this world, I whispered that little single word phrase over and over again in her ear and I still do when I lay her down to sleep or she needs to be comferted, puts her right out! Thank You all for the kind words of this and all my work! Does anyone know what Baja means?

[Ruth]

Reclaiming the fathers responsibility....potent work love...this has moved me so much....beautifully penned, as is all your work and the title is excellent! xx

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the title! This was awesome!

[Helpless]

awww very sweet poem i agree

[Ripple of Aqua]

Very sweet from her daddy dearest. :)

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Personal write. Nicely done. Actions speak louder than words. Keep the promise. A daughter without a father...not good.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool and heartfelt.