I Got This

 I'm not done just yet

I don't want to leave just yet

 

 I've still have much to do

I've still have much to give

 

 I just want to live

 

 I'm not wasting my time

I'm not biding it either

 

 I've hit a few snags, trials if you will

I've had a few ruff times, tribulations at thier worst

 

  I just want to be free

 

 So just incase you wonder

You did not place this burden on me

I placed it on myself

 

 I carry the scars so others dont have to

I feel the pain because others cannot

I will take on what you cannot shoulder

 

 Dont worry I am strong

I can handle the weight

I can handle the load

so that you dan't have to.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Lovely sentiment for sure.

[Writing with Kae]

I love this poem it shows how much you care about others and it also shows that you're a very dependable person

[light and ashes]

Great selfless poem. But you don't have to bear your burdens alone if you share a little of the weight you will be happier and the weight won't be nearly as heavy.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Tortueus words you speak of makes the reader ache to be at your side so you shouldn't have to bare the burden alone. This is so heartfilled, but I must admit; you are an idiot if you think you are alone in the burdening.

[Yina]

Wow I want strength like that! Keep up! Stay strong:)

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I really like this. I like what you're saying here; the title fits the poem perfectly. It's very refreshing, and something we all need to hear once in a while.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was an outstanding poem with great meaning! Excellent