A Wink

 Gray Sky, Dark Cloud

So dull, So loud,

It screams

I hear.

 

 Blind Night, Deaf Shroud

It beckons

I ignore.

 

 Forboding Wind, Furious Proud

It answers

I question.

 

 

Reviews

[AndyJCash]

There seems to be composure about this poem. Where people would panic you take a deep breath and assess the situation. Where people would retaliate angrily you simply reply with something constructive. Where people would accept you would sensibly try and go further and wonder why it is so. A level-headed mind is needed in this world.
That's what I got, whether I've missed the point entirely is another thing altogether :P

[Linear]

I wink, you blink.
I stink, you drink
From the wind I hide while I watch you fly :0)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I think this is my favorite of yours........excellent work

[Ruth]

Assessing ans searching and ready to face...nice turn around love...this is concise but has such powerful depth as all of your work carries :) xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work. Very dark and foreboding.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the imagery, this was awesome.

1 mispelling :bechons is beckons

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Interesting and visual write. Thought provoking. Good flow too.

[Daisy Morgy]

i like the wonder in it all coming to the main cause of why a question many ask good write!

[Ripple of Aqua]

Powerful, but I can't help but question if it is encouraging?