As One

The picture is of the person to whom this poem is refering!

A Gypsie and a Rose I see, as it goes through the words that I read, as I sit and I need the one true love that I have always felt, before her I have not knelt on bended knee, but before her whose face I've yet to grace, I will be on knee bent with ring in hand and ask her to be my wife for all of life to come. I know that in my soul she was made for me and I her for her to see, that one day we will meet face to face as it should and will be. You see my love is one that yet I have to see but soon that day will come and soon our hearts and souls will be as one.

Reviews

[.n.]

This makes me think of spoken word- it seems like a piece that would be performed. It is, of course, a wonderful theme and nicely written. I think whos' would be whose though. Very sweet.

[ivizarx]

Love and devotion always good themes to play with in poetry and I can say you definitely make the use of them taste like dessert and candy. a well-done writing for "real-life" poetry.

[GypZrosesR4ever]

You are so amazingly sweet...I swear...thank you

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very nice indeed!

[Ruth]

This is strikingly beautiful love..so sublime!
Worded perfectly and a blessing to read....wonderful xx

[Helpless]

beauty beginning and awesome all the way through out

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

and she is beautiful...........I hope all your dreams come true :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully expressed of love to come! Well done

[TJ]

very beautiful