Two Please

Two, two please, Ill take two of whatever it is that you're giving out.
Because whatever it is, it must be better than this, whatever it is.

  Two of you to dance through my sole, to take control and make me breath again.
To set me ablaze in eternal bliss, bliss that flies forth colliding into your heart, binding yours to mine.

  Make the my love a fanciful game for two too play in sensual ways.
Creating rules for not to follow in this our dance of pain.
Pain  for the that holds you free and engraves your image in me.

  Divide in my mind to think apart, but put together the puzzle that holds the key.
Free the heart whos' breath you hold in soft and sensuous hands.
Then two again can join as one and be each others memory.

  Ill take two please, of what your giving out.

Author's Note

Go Ahead, your going to anyway, Get your critique on.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool. Reminds me of Ecclesiastes 4:9.

[Ripple of Aqua]

split distracted and thrilling