Id Miss You

Id Miss You

A Poem by realmwriter

If the waves rolled in and rolle away, I wouldnt miss them, but Id miss you.
If the wind blew in and then blew out, I wouldnt miss it, but Id miss you.
  If the mountains fell and the sees did swell, I wouldnt miss them, but Id miss you.
If the lands swallowed the heavens Id still miss you.
  Id miss all the smiles Ive seen on your face, Id miss the way you make me feel when Im in your grace.
  I could miss you standing next to me because Id crave your gentle touch.
  I miss your breath when you kiss my lips, I miss your gaze when you stare into my eyes.
I miss you more now than I did ten minutes ago.
  I would miss you if you were here and you were all that I could hear.      
  Because the sound of your voice doesnt carry over the sound of my pounding heart.
  It only pounds like that when you are near and away from me I fear its ripping out of my chest.
  So come back to me my princess so my heart will slow, and I can breath again.
  Come back to me so I can catch my breath and your presence can take it away again.
  Come back to me so I can feel that way again, that way only you can make me feel.
  Make my heart pound like that again when all you do is stand near to me.
  I want to hold your hand again because I can feel your skin again.
I want to feel your skin again so I can make you feel me again.
Because if you can feel me again you wont miss me now as I miss you again.
  I dont want to miss you now and I didnt want to miss you then.
Because if I miss you then you miss me and I dont want you to hurt again.
  I miss you even when your sleeping, which means I miss you now...


© 2011 realmwriter


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Cool verse about the ultimate emotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Romantic words, good expression. A little all over the place. The last line is memorable and lovely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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First thought was of star crossed lovers. An affair that could never be made possible thanks to society.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Harrison, AR



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You know, I can write about almost any subject, in poetic form and even an ocasional short story, but I find it most difficult to write about myself. I am an artist at heart and will use whatever m.. more..

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