Lest We Suffer

Lest We Suffer

A Poem by realmwriter

 
 

Low I go to sleep under my filthy bridge
The gap between you and I the gap that cant be filled
You see me on the street everyday yet ignore me
I suffer the starvation that humanity has forced upon me

Everyone says they want to do something about the homeless
Why not just do what Rudy Juliane did
Put us all in jail
Why suffer us yet another empty day

When you lay down your weary head
You dont think of us the ones you dont see
Oh you see us with your eyes
But you ignore us by your deed

Some of the homeless may have chosen to be ware they are
Some did not
For those whom  did not you see them as the bain of humanity
You see them as the gum on the bottom of your shoe

Something to scrape off on the curb and be forgotten
Something to be discarded in the refuse container
Something that you think really isnt there
Something you can only hope to cast out with disdain

Low I go to sleep under my filthy bridge
Suffer the starvation that humanity has forced upon me
Suffer another empty day
Low I go to sleep under my filthy bridge
Low I go to sleep under my filthy bridge

Suffer  me humanity, Suffer Me humanity, Suffer  Me Humanity
SUffer ME HUmanity, SUFfer ME HUManity, SUFFer ME HUMANity
SUFFEr ME HUMANIty, SUFFER ME HUMANITy, SUFFER ME HUMANITYYYYYYYYY

I wrote this in 04 posted on myspace in 05
Dec 18, 2010

© 2011 realmwriter


Author's Note

realmwriter
Feel free to tare this one apart. Or cirtique if you like.

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Love the ending, the accentuating of every letter from lowercase to uppercase is a stroke of genius. Nice work overall.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the odd point of view that you choose to look upon your situation. Even at your lowest you find that there are still things that are great about life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very eye opening read. We don't see the true ones who suffer who never asked to be put in these situations.


Posted 13 Years Ago


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You know, I can write about almost any subject, in poetic form and even an ocasional short story, but I find it most difficult to write about myself. I am an artist at heart and will use whatever m.. more..

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