Nothing As Yet

 

I wander along these empty streets and wonder when im going to get to wear I dont have to go
I wonder if I'll wind up dead and how I got to where I am.
I wonder where the day will carry me and where Im going to lay down my head.
I try to find comfort in the smallest thing only too realize nothing is there.
I simply wander aimlessly and hope I don't hit a f****n tree.
Yet maybe if I did, that would help heel the wound left there by my ignorance

Heal the wound that floes so free for all of you and me to see
Heal the wound that floes so free put there by a condeming society
Heal the wound that can't be healed, put out the fire that doesnt burn

Feed the hungry, help the pore, find whats real and do some more
Look upon this empty earth, and see what we have to birth
Look upon her sad and lonely face, she takes you away to another place
A world that you don't see from here where you can think that its not real

I wander along these empty streets trying to make since of where I don't have to go
I wonder where im going to go from here that really isn't to important to care

Heal the wound that can't be healed, put out the fire that doesnt burn.

This was written in August of 05

Dec 18, 2010

Author's Note

i have revised this piece by adding what I hope to be proper puncuation, and fixing some grammatical errors, though prolly not all of them, so please tell me what you think and I purposely put in a couple of words with differant meaning! Let me have it, your honest opinion. Cause you know its an onion, right!

Reviews

[Yina]

I like this. It has a very interesting point.
Heal the wound that flows so free put there by a condemning society
Makes me wonder how many millions of poeple get these wounds......:(

[realmwriter]

In some instances, and I know it makes for a bit more difficult a read and iritates some, though that is not my intent, I misspell some words intentionally to change there affect and, in some cases I use words that have an intirtly differant meaning than the one that should be there to make the reader think, even if after the poem has been read! I do not do this to anoy, only to make one scratch there head and wonder what I was thinking, I know it works, as it is proved here! Thank You for reading my work noe the less, I do apreciate all of the reviews!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Despite the misspellings, the pain and longing are palpable.

Nice work.

[Ripple of Aqua]

I love the way that you twist on what the object is; 'heal the wound that can't be healed, put out the fire that doesn't burn' its puzzling and realistic.

[IceDragonOfPluto]

you can feel the emotions really well, in here. I sense so much turmoil.