Take Flight Devine

 

In this world, in this time, in this space
I feel as though there is no embrace
As if I cant escape this hollow face
In this life, in this strife, in this face
A love so real it cant take place
A heart so healed it cant feel your disgrace
A soul so bright it is your long embrace
Come unto this love of mine
Feel whats there to be had
Come unto this love divine
Take whats here and dont be sad
Dispose of hate to embrace love
Dispose of pain to embrace pleasure
Dispose of jealousy to embrace acceptance
In this world for all that is right and true
Nothing can take away the love we've shared
Let not those that are against you pain you
Deceive not those whom love you
Heal the broken soul so that it can fly
Let these words take you ware they will.

05 and still alive

Dec 18, 2010

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[IceDragonOfPluto]

I enjoyed the flow and the rhyming. I love the message the speaker has to the beloved. 'Ignore the world's ignorance and allow someone who truly loves you to protect you from it.' That's the message I get from this. Well done, sir. Truly a romantic piece.

[Yina]

Wow. I absolutely love this!! Boy am I ever glad I read this write now!:) Love it!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work. I like your style. It is simple, straightforward, somber and inspiring all at the same time.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Wonderfully great, no other explanation worthy