Which Path To Choose

 

In life there are tribulations, mistakes
that cannot be changed, hard lessons to
learn. Walk down that rode the one that
forks at the end. You've been there before
you'll go there again. You've chosen the
left and it was wrong. So why do you choose
it yet again? You've chosen the right and
you have seen that it was rite. So why do
you not choose it now? Why must you continue
to make the same mistakes? Do you not see?
Do you not learn? Is every road you walk
down forked at the end? Can it not bee that
you are condemned to commit the same egregious
errors with every intrinsic decision you
make? Can it not bee that it is within your
power to change such a devastating fate.
Maybe it is not, but you shall soon see!

05 friend 05

Dec 18, 2010

Author's Note

Please fell free to Critique even the critique when your done.

Reviews

[Yina]

Maybe it is not, but you shall soon see!
I love the way this poem is written!:) Beautiful!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work. Very much a tribute to Robert Frost.

[Ripple of Aqua]

I like the internal and external conflict that rises here.

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This is really well written. It does not feel forced at all. Remember rhyming is part of poetry, but expression is key. That shines here. One of your best.

[IceDragonOfPluto]

Nice. It reminds me alot of Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken." I enjoyed the flow of the piece.