Me Seeing Mirror

  yesterday i wandered away from myself
i found myself looking back at what i thought was me
but the someone looking through the mirror didnt see

the someone not seen didnt know i was looking and felt left out
the left-out one looked around and seen all that had been looked in on and stepped out of the mirror to go back from then on

then on went the symphony of the seeing and the seen all that is there to be seen is there right in front of what i thought was me
on with all the looking and seeing back at me

yesterday i wandered away from me to see the other mees that visit every once in a while and i find i like all the mees i see even if they cant see me

i broke the me seeing mirror i was getting bored with it i started to see the me that i didnt want to see the twisted feeble dying old me
that scares me the feebleness the frailty of it all

i put the pieces of my me seeing mirror in a dresser drawer
so i could put them back together again when i am that feeble old me so that hopefully ill see the me i want to see again.

i know that me is still there and that me sees me now looking at it wondering the same thing as i is that the me i used to see when i saw the feeble me old dying me that me scares me.

so the me i see broke the me seeing mirror cause he was scared of me...

Author's Note

Ignore any and all grammar and spelling issues. Please, however feel free to tell me about my writing style and critique my work.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Wow! I've never quite seen something styled quite like this. The repetition had my mind going in circles ( a good thing) I was baffled by the world you described with the many "mes" Very splendid and unique execution.

[realmwriter]

Thank you so very much. You are the first person to review this and I was actually caught off guard a bit. Wasn't expecting this to get a review at all really. I wrote it a while back and now I have to go and add punctuation and all that jazz. I am very glad that you liked it. I do too, kinda weird huh.

[Briana O'Connor]

I think it's amazing! Apparently somebody else has reviewed it, because it says two, but i'm the only one who shows and whoever reviewed it is an a*s clown, because you deserve much higher than a 93! I gave you a 99, because of the few punctuation errors. Dang fudgetards just don't know good poetry when it bites em on the booty! Is this considered prose btw?

[realmwriter]

No this wouldn't be prose either. So I guess I can't see the ratings reviewers give me. That's not fair. I probably don't want to anyway. Yeah I told the asstard clownfiltcher to get off my page on a previous review his douchecanoeness left me. But I deleted that hattrick in one brief click. Glad you liked this one too. Not one of my favorite though. But I am still glad that you lied it.