Mountain Dew

I read about traditional Japanese Haiku and I have tried to pen one here. I think that it is about as traditional as I understand Haiku to be.

G

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h

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w

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B

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d

 

b

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v

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g

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Green hat sat red worn

Blocked by empty vision

Red hat lay green torn

 

Author's Note

Traditional Haiku is said to be written in a single vertical line so I have don't that here to honor the Japanese verse, but I have also written it in English: three horizontal line verse to make it easier for you to read.

Reviews

[Brittany]

i love you lol cuz i love mtn dew

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much. Prolly the first Haiku I've written, though I must admit that it isn't really about the drink. But kind of sort of.