Think of Me Always

 

I would shine upon the gloom
I would take away the frown
Granted your wish to me

I would bloom in your heart
I would comfort your soul
Growing in the weed

I would watch over you my child
I would help you along your path
Blessing fall upon you

I would desire to come true
I would write a life anew
Sleep in love my child

I would think only of peace
I would think only of you
Think of me always. 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

An interesting piece, almost has a religious feel.

[realmwriter]

It kind does huh? Didn't really write it like that but I do like a certain aspect of spirituality in my works. Glad you noticed it. Thank you so much and I happy that you liked it.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this is most defiantly my favorite one. This is absolutely Beautiful, short and too the point.

[realmwriter]

Thank you I am glad that you liked it. And I truly appreciate it.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is rich with beauty! Each stanza held so much emotion for love! STUNNING!

[realmwriter]

That's first I've been inspired to write like this and it's due to April, she's a great inspiration. Thank you so much. I am very happy you liked it.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[AprilRN1210]

This one looks familiar... I am glad you posted it... lovely write... I know from where this came and appreciate the sentiment that you expressed here... well done Derick... a little different from what I have seen from you and I like the direction that this is going... :)

[realmwriter]

I just well I guess I kind of jacked it from you but not really. I just. Well I love your work and I went off of that. Thank You April.

[AprilRN1210]

It is the biggest compliment ever when you can inspire.. Very flattering-- thank youuu!!!

[realmwriter]

:)........

[anne]

nice read and so well rhymed... :))

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much

[kublakhan27]

A more direct approach for you but no less effective...the emotion is crystal-clear and palpable, and I think it could apply to many different types of relationships...I really like the second-to-last stanza...the desire to come true, to be discovered in a sense by love...the declarations of devotion are mature and deliberate, but there's an element of innocence as well...gorgeous work all around, nicely done my friend.

[realmwriter]

Thank you for such a stellar review. I must admit though, that this is do to inspiration I drew from one of Aprils pieces. I am very glad you liked it.