Travel Through the Blue

 Poetry in motion,

the call and dance of light and ocean.

It's color reflected in the sky.

How the gods must have felt on high.

A shaft of sun, of now and then,

come bursting forth to set the day anew.

 

A time once gone hath awakened,

a need to grow in crisp, cold morning dew.

Of forth and back, of hither and fro,

the day springs ahead to begin again in you.

 

A shaft of light,

to color the night and put aside the gray.

A cloud lit sky, to thrust the eye,

into the beauty of their sway.

 

Oh be not the ship that sailed, across a sky so blue,

it bucked and tossed to tempests best,

the ship that sailed to you.

On clouds it rode, its sails of light unfurled, steady as she goes.

 

She knows, this day has come to call,

to rise from slumber deep.

This day has come to bid of thee,

that which it placed before your feet.

 

But bid the such notion as to ride the clouds,

as if ships in tossing oceans.

Bear the light the sails of past,

to deliver thee from night.

 

The breath that caught in wind and wild,

in clouds of morning hew.

If not for shafts of sun,

through ships to travel through the blue.

Reviews

[Adam M. Snow]

This poem as left me speechless and awestruck, such a beautiful, amazing, remarkable, tremendous, exquisite, awesome write, my friend. Keep up the good work and don't ever stop writing and remember, always stay inspired. Write on my friend. :) This poem deserves a 100/100 rating from me. I truly, truly loved this.

[realmwriter]

Well thank you sir, for your wonderfully colorful review. I am very glad that you liked it and I will never stop writing.

[Adam M. Snow]

You're welcome and I'm glad to hear ;-P

[AprilRN1210]

This is pretty exquisite poetry in motion here... The flow felt as if waves of back and forth with your use of rich, colorful language.. the imagery is dreamy and palpable.. It is as if teasing all of my senses.. I can feel the salty spray of the ocean, the wind wild and cool, the sunlight on my face.... stunning piece of writing my friend.. I absolutely loved this one... well done sir!

[realmwriter]

I'm not sure If I already thanked you for your review April, so If not, I will do it again here. Thank you so much. I appreciate your every word. Your a very good writer yourself and I am very glad that you like this piece.

[Ashira Macy]

I love ocean poetry and you really outdid yourself on this one too. Fantastic imagery in this sent me sailing through the scene. Great work.

[realmwriter]

Thank you so very much. I truly appreciate it.

[Moonie]

I really like the idea behind this. The vocabulary is vivid, and the creativity is impressive. :))

[realmwriter]

Thank you so much. Different for me, but I will write about whatever inspires me.

[Moonie]

In my library! :)

[realmwriter]

Awesome :), Thank you.