Happy Sunshine and Roses

 Daffodils and butterflies, morning dew and dandelions.

Fields of clover and poppy in the fresh rain of a new day.

Dawning of a new, someone with which to sing and dance and frolic in the fields.

Rainbows play in the mountains where spring beds down for winter, a nap long overdo.

Summer comes to play with autumn and dance in the light of the fireflies.

The moon is out this crisp late night, a warm hello it bids.

So let the rain come and wash anew a since of joy in the sun.

 

Let the morning light dance all night in after thought of dew.

Spring has come to visit friends where winter beds down for the year.

Autumn rests for now my friends but will find it's day again.

Lets pick flowers and while the hours in blissful poppies hew.

Oh what a radiant day tis breaking over yonder near the mew.

Fresh morning air beckon us come, drink in the dew of grass on foot.

Come my friends, lets skip and dance and sing a song of sixpence.

 

Butterfly fields in morning yields the breaking of the day.

When winter comes round yet again, in snow we frolic away.

In wooded forest glen we play the same as then, the children of our youth.

Skipping stones across the pound, lazy our line in the drink.

Resting away the weary day with sun and sand at our feet.

Let us pick pansies and delight in daisies, warm and mild and meek.

Come my friends, before summer ends, a good morning, bid the a due.

Reviews

[Aarontastic]

You've written a good pastoral poem, but it's somewhat marred by spelling mistakes (or what I assume to be spelling mistakes, unless you're doing some Joycian thing):

Automn = Autumn

a due = adieu (assuming you meant 'goodbye' in french)

dasys, pansys, fireflys = dasies, pansies, fireflies

Looks alright besides those cases. I'm not nitpicking just for fun, but if you make a lot of grammatical errors, readers will find themselves constantly correcting for them, and so they won't fully be able to appreciate your lovely poem here. Therefore, they're worth correcting I think.

It's a really optimistic and uplifting poem, and it makes me want to go outside more lol. You have done a good job conveying all the beautiful imagery of nature.

[realmwriter]

Thank you for pointing out the spelling issues. I really appreciate it. I have to admit that, while I am good with words, I am terrible at spelling them correctly. I always have a dictionary close at hand to remedy such errors before they occur, however, on this occasion, I had none for which to access and when I typed it out I was using Internet explorer, no spell check. Thank you again for the review.

[realmwriter]

Thank you for pointing those out. I will make the corrections you have noted as soon as I can. Glad you like this one. Get outside more. That's pretty much, always my suggestion.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Oh, this is beautiful! I love the imagery you use, I can almost feel the sunshine on my face and smell the fresh air. Definitely brings back memories of summers spent outside, running barefoot through the grass, splashing in puddles, chasing after butterflies... Beautifully written!! :)

[realmwriter]

I used to do that as a kid. Catch fireflys in a jar to use as a night light. Dance in the rain. Simply just run amuck. Why pray tell, must we get old? A question, I am affraid, none of us can answer. Thank you for the review, I really do appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the use of the flowers and the good description. Your words took me to good places. I agree with the logic of the words. We need to enjoy the warm days of Summer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[realmwriter]

Your very welcome Coyote and Thank you for the review, It is much appreciated.

[Parimal Pratyush]

Great imagery. Fantastic choice of expressions and words and comparisons. Perfect. :D I wish I could write a poem like this.

[realmwriter]

I am sure that you can, because you are not giving yourself the credit that you should. We all struggle as writers to, in so much as we try, find new idea and inspiration to write about. This piece was particularly difficult for me to write because I usually write very dark poetry, that and I am never sure how well received my poetry will be. I know my readers like the dark stuff I write, but I'm not sure about the more "Happy Happy Joy Joy", lighter stuff, so I rarely write it. My point is though, that you can't let that stop you from trying something new. Just try. I think you might surprise yourself.

[Matching Socks]

This was such a delight!!
*mwah!

[realmwriter]

Thank You so much.

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely poem. There are some things that have already been pointed out as others, if they are poetic license, it helps to put it in the author's note to save having to explain, and if they are not, they are listed in another review.

[realmwriter]

Thank You very much. I will take that into consideration.

[John Anderson]

Beautifully expressed and masterfully penned. A fine poem that I enjoyed very much.

[realmwriter]

Thank you again my friend.

[Ayushi]

It has all the beautiful facades which nature has bestowed upon us.
Lovely and soothing poetry.

[realmwriter]

So very seasonal, full of love, and felt, through your words, of a real new yearning for spring, also for a fact in life maybe, don't know, just juggling with my feelings... as balls of the universe, planets, to magnetic fields, of friendship... each new phase of life, as a season we live, and live each year we get older, seems to be dancing in your words here, fantastic. You see future, past, and present, as no one else... :) thank you for your words, and words of art my sweet friend.

- Elisa

[realmwriter]

This is an unusual write for me, not sure I am entirely comfortable in it. But in order to improve, one must continue to challenge him or herself. Thank you so much for the review. From your's and Poppys, I know I'm headed in the right direction...

Oh I know that feeling, but it's good you go out of your "comfort zone" now and then, I'm proud of you you dared and did. For I personally really saw this as a "New thing" from you, a "New beginning" and those can be so scary, but the same time so lovely! I think you should accept the fact it's being loved by me aswell as by sweet Poppy. :) Always my pleasure. You are a great writer my friend, never think otherwise ;)

[realmwriter]

Well thank you so very much. I'm at a loss.

I could feel that through your words, but there is also a feel of a rebirth....

[realmwriter]

Yes I do believe something of a rebirth is laced into my words here. Hmm, curiouser and curiouser

Me too... keep me in touch about this process, I think you just are unconciously more aware of what will happen then ratio will believe lol :)

[realmwriter]

I will indeed, but alas, you need sleep yes?

I'm a night owl, have many night shifts, no worries.... :)