Please Don't Cry...!

 I met a man who had a thousand rules
and a thousand miles of life to loose
 He chose to break every guide line he ever knew
now his short life is truly through
 I met a man who had a thousand toes
where he went, he only knows
  I know for sure he feathered the grass
but in the end even he did pass
 On to next life he went too quick
it's okay though, the guy was a prick
 If ever I meat another like him
i'll walk away before my life goes dim
 I met a man who walked a thousand walks
he walked as if he wore only socks
 When he w***e a hole in the toe
he simply picked up and onward he'd go
 I met a man who's life was cut short
his ghost appeared to me in my glass of fine port
 When I asked what he knew of the after life
my glass broke as he whispered there's no pain or strife
 So I'll take this life and live till I die
It's been fun, when I go, please don't cry...!
 
 
 

Reviews

[Saumya]

oh... that was sooo lovely, so wonderfullly expressed the great thougt :
"live life to the fullest of what you can, till you are left with the last breath in you...!!!"
reallly great.....!!!!
i must say:
very very very very wellllllllllllllll done....!!!

keep writing and rocking,

with best wishes,
saumya

[realmwriter]

Thank you so very much for this kind review. I am pleased that you enjoyed reading it...!

[Saumya]

most welcome...!!
:)

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a great and thought-provoking piece. Everyone is on Life's journey, and we should all get the most out of it. I especially like the lines:

I met a man who's life was cut short
his ghost appeared to me in my glass of fine port
When I asked what he knew of the after life
my glass broke as he whispered there's no pain or strife.

Not sure if the spelling "w***e" was what you were going for here (wore?)
Great write!

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much, especially for pointing out that embarrassing typo...! OOPS...! It's been fun, when I go, please don't cry...! Makes me smile that you liked it..! :)