What Do You See?

 I see the diamonds that sparkle off of the sun.
I see the glimmer that shines off of the moon.
I see a world of peace inside a world of change.
I see faith beyond years in the sparkle of a happy tear.
I see illumination of an idea of a spark ignited by imagination.
I see endless possibilities through eyes as pretty as pearls.

 I see flowers wake as the sun sinks below the blanket of earth.
I see the moon wink as a child stares into space dreaming before bed.
I see an entirely new world come alive in the wee hours of evening.
I see fog form and carry away the dinginess of the day.
I see crickets come out to play and hide at a passer by.
I see the night for dark and light through shadow.

 I know what I see, what do you see?

Reviews

[Ruth]

Lovely, I am always pleased to return here and read you :) xoxo

[realmwriter]

Thank you so much Poppy. I'm always pleased to read one of your reviews and works...! :)

[Ruth]

Most welcome hon!

[CHRIS ANDES]

i see my dreams come true
:)
nice write my friend

[realmwriter]

I see mine too but I must admit, even as optimistic as I am, they do become a bit blurry at times...!

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha,yeah
that's life
:)

[AJ Kristiansen]

Thanks for a beautiful piece realmwriter :) Yes certainly different from a lot of your other work but I like it and I feel it's good to venture into new territory :) Just to let your know that in your first two lines you don't need the second 'of' the first one is grammatically correct :) Keep up the great work, this is really amazing :)

[realmwriter]

Thank You for your review and I will be sure to fix the error...!

[Don Shaw]

Great work! The world , as you see it.

[realmwriter]

Thank You very much...!

[Lily Mae]

I see you...seeing your world, and it's all good :) xo

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much...!

[quinfinn]

yes, i like the fact that what you see is nothing but the positive aspects of your world in this observant and cheerful piece. (oh, line three, i think you meant "peace") ever since i switched to mozilla firefox it wants to respell things for me....anyway, i enjoyed this rather cheery view of the world of day and night in your particular corner of our universe.

[realmwriter]

I did indeed mean "peace" not "piece", I will be sure to fix that. I'm using Firefox as well and I prefer it over Explorer. Thank you so much for the review, I always appreciate corrections in typos and what not...!

[Kitt]

Your poem seems to be a rather optimist view. It's showing all the good in the world and keeping out the bad. It's interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

[realmwriter]

You should read others of mine, they are usually not so upbeat...!

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much for reading and for the review, I really appreciate it...!