Till I Believe

Just a late night writing that kept kept banting back and forth in my mind.

 I don't want insanity

to become the better part of me

the piece of me that is all I see.

 

 My eyes peeled back

beneath the black stained in blood

to flood my innocence in mud.

 

 What could have been

has came and went inside of then

but then again I don't belong in yesterday.

 

 So here I stay in now and am,

where presently I wonderIf

If I could have been what never was.

 

 Tomorrow comes inside a plea

that I get to see the dirt

from the side that doesn't hurt.

 

 So wrap me up inside of me

to tie me down and let me be

Keep me here till I believe.

Reviews

[Amberway]

I really enjoyed reading this! Love the message

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much...! Means a lot.

[Amberway]

You are quite welcome!

[Ruth]

Sometimes gotta persist with that reeling insane vibe beaut...tis the only way to keep sane in an insane world lol
♥

[realmwriter]

Yes it is Poppy. either that or can act insane and the sane ones will leave you alone...!

[CHRIS ANDES]

it's really good to reflect to yourself once in a while
..the subject is really interesting
=]

[realmwriter]

Thank you very much...!

[Lily Mae]

"So wrap me up inside of me
to tie me down and let me be
Keep me here till I believe."

I love this.. I think your really on fire with your work and different ideas and techniques.. :) xo

[realmwriter]

Thank You so much. I wish I could add a new poem every day but I seem to not draw insperation every day. Odd isn't it?

[Lily Mae]

No I've gone through weeks without it.. But sooner or later something jars the mind and or heart and it all comes pouring out :) xo

[realmwriter]

When I t does I usually write thre or four at a time. Then I am stunted again for a couple weeks or more. I wish it could be more fluid.

[That_Girl]

I like the poem as a whole but no too fond of the hectic rhyming. Now, I'm not saying there's anything wrong with it... just seems weird to me. But that's just me. I do like the poem a lot. :)

[realmwriter]

It is a bit "hectic" as far as the rhyming goes, and I kinda did that on purpose because my mind is so hectic mosst of the time. Thank you so much for reading it...!

[quinfinn]

if you have read my profile you will note that i say life with love has flavor...
now, i never said it always tastes good and those flavors are tiresome or unappealing, looks as if , by this write, you long for a cotton candy love and you
keep getting vinegar...move to another table. i really like this write and i hope i haven't misread your underlying meaning...at least...it's what i read into it...
good job!

[realmwriter]

You have misread nothing. I am happy with my girlfriend and I love her but she is a bit vanilla for my tastes...! Thank you for reading.

[quinfinn]

thank you for sharing

[realmwriter]

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