I Love The Girl

I Love The Girl

A Poem by screamin'ian
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More of the same unwillingness to move on...

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...it's hard to believe that you don't feel the bond. It's hard, too, to believe you won't find the courage to engage me, to engage with me.
You see, I see between the lines. I see the damaged girl that can't help but lie, the pain that once i saw you cry.
The words I heard that cut so deep: "I could have been myself the whole time..." how can I heal? how should I feel? I never stood a chance against that deflection. I love the girl behind the reflection.
I only do what you ask me to; I only did what I was responsible to.
I have no way to get through but that you give me...

© 2012 screamin'ian


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A conversation, a letter - a call to be heard, a frustration of words:

'The words I heard that cut so deep: "I could have been myself the whole time..." how can I heal? how should I feel? I never stood a chance against that deflection. I love the girl behind the reflection.'

I guess we can only keep near, hold out hands, and show we care. Your words creep slowly as if longing to scream but daren't. Wanting to help but being locked out is one of the hardest experiences; patience and silence when dealing with extreme emotions are so necessary.

Posted 12 Years Ago


"I love the girl behind the reflection"... very perceptive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was totally awsome..
First piem i read this day :-)
And the rhyme in that is wonderfuln..great work ;-)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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